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Post by Delta on Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:37 pm

Ok, this is an attempt at making a decent origin story. It's not finished. Written from RaiTwo's (me) perspective.

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I was wandering through the middle of nowhere, because I felt like it, and found a volcano. Mount Melt. Anyway, there was this cave system, so I built a fortress in it. Why not build a fortress in a volcano cave system?

About a month later, I finished making a giant satelite dish. Guess what? I now have a permenent satelite linkup to the Internet.

Using online tutorials, I got started in robotics. The result? An evil, overpowered robotic Lucario. He's probably trying to kill me right now. Thus the amount of scanners.

Oh, right. I should probably say something about myself. Well, I'm not a normal Raichu. I have two tails.
And I'm a sniper. A really good sniper.

The robots I have swarming through the caves are shockbots. They're pretty basic, and nearly indestructible. One hand is a railgun, and the other is like a human hand. But it can grip stuff, and deliver an electric shock in exess of 100000000000 volts, 200000 amps. Nothing can survive a shock that powerful, except Lucariobot, who has been upgrading himself.

Oh yeah, and I'm a platform racer. An unfortunate accident involving a portable mine, several bazookas, and evil squirrels (LOL) caused a large rock to fall on Rukario77's hand, forcing him to amputate it with his knife.

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It's not finished. Any comments?

Also, I was lol-ing at evil squirrels.


Last edited by B46Delta on Tue Feb 08, 2011 5:04 pm; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : I know that now, but surely there's a MORE EFFECTIVE MEANS OF COMMUNICATION THAN THIS?!)
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Post by Rukario77 on Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:49 am

Lucariobot?

Well, the Lucario me (call him Rukario77) is 85% Lucario, 10% robot (Robotic hand), 5% Ice.

Also mention how when racing, you accidentally made a rock fall on Rukario77's hand. Forcing him to amputate it with his knife.
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Post by Delta on Sun Feb 06, 2011 4:05 am

Yes, but Lucariobot is 100% robotic. And evil.
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Post by Rukario77 on Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:10 am

I edited your post, because you didn't feel like it.
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Post by Delta on Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:13 am

But I did edit it... confused
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Post by Rukario77 on Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:40 am

No, you hit quote instead of edit. They're right next to each other.
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Post by Delta on Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:37 am

Oops.
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Post by Dapianokid on Thu Feb 10, 2011 11:17 pm

Ruke... Aren't you british as well?
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